[Debconfsubs-team] review request: Subtitles for "GNU/screen comes to Debian Installer" at DebConf16

[AYANOKOUZI, Ryuunosuke]

Dear Roger Shimizu (presenter)
and debconfsubs-team members,

I just pushed English and Japanese subtitles
for "GNU/screen comes to Debian Installer" talk
by Roger Shimizu in DebConf16 to debconfsubs repository [1].

[1] https://anonscm.debian.org/cgit/debconfsubs/debconfsubs.git/commit/?id=eb195d5494223df9ffcd47d27b9601dc849414dd

Would you review my commit in terms of "English grammar",
"validity of English audio-typing", and "formatting subtitles"?
Of course, I checked the contents carefully.
But, if you could review, it would be very much appreciated.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Sincerely yours,
Ryuunosuke Ayanokouzi
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AYANOKOUZI, Ryuunosuke <i38w7i3 at yahoo.co.jp>
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