[Debconfsubs-team] review request: Subtitles for "GNU/screen comes to Debian Installer" at DebConf16

[AYANOKOUZI, Ryuunosuke]

Dear Alberto,

Thanks for reply and review.

At Sun, 31 Jul 2016 21:53:10 +0200,
alberto fuentes <pajaro at gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> On Sun, Jul 31, 2016 at 9:50 PM, alberto fuentes <pajaro at gmail.com> wrote:
> 
>     On Sun, Jul 31, 2016 at 9:43 PM, alberto fuentes <pajaro at gmail.com>
>     wrote:
>    
>         On Sun, Jul 31, 2016 at 8:01 PM, alberto fuentes <pajaro at gmail.com>
>         wrote:
>        
>             I will review it
> 
>         Okay, I reviewed the english version and upload it. Im pushing the
>         video team so they upload it to video.debian.org so they show next
>         to the videos :)
>        
>         Again, thank you for your time!
> 
>     btw, they can also be seen online here [0]
>    
>     [0] 
>     http://www.amara.org/en/videos/5qIxHzUWNMEL/info/gnuscreen_comes_to_debian_installerwebm/
> 
> Oh, and I also forgot...
> 
> This is the first translated subtitled in the history of this team. You are
> making history here!!! :)

Thank you very much for your review.
I just fixed minor errors in English subtitle
and Japanese subtitle referring to your review [1].

[1] https://anonscm.debian.org/cgit/debconfsubs/debconfsubs.git/commit/?id=444f7c4c7f09c21a7bc62d0ef09ad5a4d5b2d9f5

I hope my fix to English subtitle is reasonable.
If it is good for you, would you upload it to Amara?

Sincerely yours,
Ryuunosuke Ayanokouzi
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AYANOKOUZI, Ryuunosuke <i38w7i3 at yahoo.co.jp>
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