[debian-edu-commits] [Debian Wiki] Trivial Update of "DebianEdu/Welcome" by StevenChamberlain

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  = Welcome to Debian Edu / Skolelinux =
  
- Debian Edu / Skolelinux is an operating system based on Debian intended for use in schools.  It  contain a turn-key solution for the computer network provided to
+ Debian Edu / Skolelinux is an operating system based on Debian, intended for use in schools.  It provides a turn-key solution for a computer network provided to
- pupils in the primary schools.  The project was funded in 2001-07-02.  If you want to support the project, which is in desperate need for funding to fund developer gatherings and other project related activity,
+ pupils in primary schools.  The project was founded on 2001-07-02.
+ 
+ If you want to support the project, which is in desperate need of funding for developer gatherings and other project activities,
  [[http://www.linuxiskolen.no/slxdebianlabs/donations.html|please donate some money]].
  
  Skolelinux is a free and open source software project founded in Norway, now supporting all languages present in Debian. Its name is a direct translation of "school linux" from Norwegian, skole derived from the Latin word schola.
  
  == Interesting links ==
  
-  * DebianEdu
+  * DebianEdu main page
   * http://wiki.skolelinux.no/Presse
   * http://planet.skolelinux.org/