[debian-edu-commits] [Debian Wiki] Update of "DebianEdu/Documentation/Jessie/Features" by HolgerLevsen

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Comment:
use proper english, "upstream" is not widely understood outside developer circles

     * Music creator Rosegarden 14.02
     * GOsa 2.7.4
     * LTSP 5.5.3
-    * new boot framework: systemd. Upstream manual: [[http://www.freedesktop.org/wiki/Software/systemd/]]
+    * new boot framework: systemd. More information is available in the [[http://www.freedesktop.org/wiki/Software/systemd/|systemd manual]].
     * Debian Jessie includes about 42000 packages available for installation.
    * More information about Debian Jessie 8.0 is provided in the [[http://www.debian.org/releases/jessie/releasenotes|release notes]] and the [[http://www.debian.org/releases/jessie/installmanual|installation manual]].