[debian-edu-commits] [Debian Wiki] Update of "DebianEdu/Documentation/en/ITIL/UsefulCommands" by PetterReinholdtsen

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Updated from git.

  model           : 2
  model name      : Intel(R) Xeon(TM) CPU 2.66GHz
  }}}
- === Update configuration database ===
+ === Update the configuration database ===
  
  == Administrating packages (apt-get) ==
  
@@ -578, +578 @@

       0.0.9-1 0
          500 http://ftp.debian.org sarge/main Packages
  }}}
- Here one can see there are two versions available. Both 0.0.9-1 and 0.0.10-1
+ Here one can see that there are two versions available. Both 0.0.9-1 and 0.0.10-1
  
  If the 0.0.9-1 version of the program is wanted it can be installed using the following command
  
@@ -787, +787 @@

  
  Warning: ''Never'' unpack packages in the root directory
  
- finding which package a file came from. One can extract the package to get back the systems file like we show here.
+ if one finds which package a file came from. One can extract the package to get back the systemfile like shown later.
  
  First you need to fetch the deb package in question. This can be done by placing it in the `/tmp` directory. Use this command to unpack the files in this directory
  
@@ -834, +834 @@

  
  If you are outside a Skolelinux / Debian Edu network, the value 10.0.2.1 can be replaced with the appropriate value for the network card [[#!UsefulCommands--clguishow|with the WAN in]]. In this case it might be '''ssh -l root 192.168.1.10'''
  
- Here you will meet the same options as are present when logged into the Coyote Linux web administration. This is presented in a text based menu.
+ Here you will meet the same options present as when logged into the Coyote Linux web administration. This is presented in a text based menu.
  
  {{{
                 Coyote Linux Gateway -- Configuration Menu
@@ -879, +879 @@

  
  === Verification ===
  
- === Update configuration database ===
+ === Update the configuration database ===
  
  == Status summary for firewall (Coyote) ==
  
@@ -901, +901 @@

  }}}
   * uptime
  
- This command give the duration since last reboot for Coyote Linux.
+ This command gives the duration since the last reboot for Coyote Linux.
  
  {{{
     coyote# uptime\n  2:37pm  up 80 days,  7:55, load average: 0.00, 0.00, 0.00
@@ -944, +944 @@

  }}}
   * lsmod
  
- This command list up driver modules. This is useful to see which modules are used by network cards.
+ This command lists up driver modules. This is useful to see which modules are used by network cards.
  
  {{{
  coyote# lsmod
@@ -1021, +1021 @@

  
  coyote#reboot
  
- This command do a reboot of Coyote Linux
+ This command does a reboot of Coyote Linux
  
   * shutdown
  
  coyote#halt
  
- Here Coyote Linux is turned off
+ Here is Coyote Linux turned off
  
  == Next ==
  
@@ -1041, +1041 @@

  
  === Verification ===
  
- === Update configuration database ===
+ === Update the configuration database ===
  
  == Last ==
  
@@ -1055, +1055 @@

  
  === Verification ===
  
- === Update configuration database ===
+ === Update the configuration database ===