[debian-edu-commits] debian-edu/pkg-team/ 08/09: debian/control: Rephrase LONG_DESCRIPTION quite a bit...

[Mike Gabriel]

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commit 1d1eeddd49c17ddc53a17465c9b546dd8d877647
Author: Mike Gabriel <mike.gabriel at das-netzwerkteam.de>
Date:   Sun Aug 6 23:21:26 2017 -0400

    debian/control: Rephrase LONG_DESCRIPTION quite a bit...
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 debian/control | 22 +++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/debian/control b/debian/control
index ac91bf2..19aaff9 100644
--- a/debian/control
+++ b/debian/control
@@ -23,27 +23,27 @@ Depends:
  ${misc:Depends},
 Provides: lightdm-greeter,
 Description: Autologin greeter for LightDM
- Minimal autologin greeter for lightdm that has the same autologin
- behaviour as nodm, but being based on lightdm it stays on top of modern
+ Minimal autologin greeter for LightDM that has the same auto-login
+ behaviour as nodm, but being based on LightDM it stays on top of modern
  display manager requirements.
  .
- The difference between lightdm's built-in autologin and this greeter,
- are the behaviour in case of 0-seconds autologin delay: when lightdm
+ The difference between LightDM's built-in auto-login and this greeter,
+ are the behaviour in case of 0-seconds autologin delay: when LightDM
  autologs in with no delay, upon logout it will show the login window
- again. The intent is that if the default user logged out, they probably
+ again. The intent is that, if the default user logged out, they probably
  intend to log in again as a different user.
  .
- When managing a kiosk-like setups, if the X session quits then the
+ When managing a kiosk-like setups, once the X session quits, the
  desired behaviour is to just start it again.
  .
- Lightdm with an autologin timeout of 1 or more seconds would work as I
- need it, but one sees the login dialog window appear and disappear on
+ LightDM with an auto-login timeout of 1 or more seconds would work as
+ needed, but one sees the login dialog window appear and disappear on
  screen at each system startup. While it is functional, on a kiosk setup
- it looks estetically unprofessional to my taste.
+ this is aesthetically unprofessional.
  .
  With this greeter, the X session starts right away, and is restarted if
- it quits, without any flicker of a login dialog box.
+ it quits, without any flicker of a login dialog.
  .
  If one is not setting up a kiosk-like setup, it's very likely that the
- default autologin behaviour of lightdm is the way to go, and that this
+ default auto-login behaviour of LightDM is the way to go, and that this
  greeter is not needed.

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