[debian-edu-commits] [Debian Wiki] Update of "DebianEdu/Documentation/Buster/Requirements" by HolgerLevsen

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The "DebianEdu/Documentation/Buster/Requirements" page has been changed by HolgerLevsen:
https://wiki.debian.org/DebianEdu/Documentation/Buster/Requirements?action=diff&rev1=6&rev2=7

Comment:
improve language

  When using the default network architecture, these rules apply:
   * You need exactly one main server, the tjener.
   * You can have hundreds of workstations on the main network.
-  * You can have a lot of LTSP servers on the main network; two different subnets are preconfigured (DNS, DHCP) in LDAP, more could be added. 
+  * You can have a lot of LTSP servers on the main network; two different subnets are preconfigured (DNS, DHCP) in LDAP, more can be added. 
   * You can have hundreds of thin clients and/or diskless workstations on each LTSP server network. 
   * You can have hundreds of other machines which will have dynamic IP addresses assigned.
   * For access to the Internet you need a router/gateway (see below).
@@ -51, +51 @@

  
  The router should not run a DHCP server, it can run a DNS server, though this is not needed and will not be used.
  
- In case you already have a router but are unable to configure it like needed (not allowed to, technical reasons), an older computer with two network interfaces could be turned into a gateway between the existing network and the Debian Edu one.
+ In case you already have a router but are unable to configure it as needed (eg because you are not allowed to do so, or for technical reasons), an older computer with two network interfaces can be turned into a gateway between the existing network and the Debian Edu one.
  
  A simple way is to install Debian Edu on this computer; select 'Minimal' as profile during installation.