[debian-edu-commits] [Git][debian-edu/upstream/libpam-mklocaluser][master] misc: typo and grammar fixes.

[Mike Gabriel (@sunweaver)]

Mike Gabriel pushed to branch master at Debian Edu / upstream / libpam-mklocaluser


Commits:
8d90ef78 by Mihai Moldovan at 2022-06-29T20:51:17+02:00
misc: typo and grammar fixes.

- - - - -


2 changed files:

- debian/README
- debian/control


Changes:

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debian/README
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@@ -1,11 +1,12 @@
-libpam-mklocalusre
+libpam-mklocaluser
 ===================
 
-PAM configuration to enable add users able to log in, presumably using
-some network directory information like NIS or LDAP, and when they log
-in a local users with the uid and gid information from the networked
-directory is created, and their password is cached on the local disk
-to allow them to log in also when disconnected from the net.
+PAM configuration to enable locally unknown users to log in, presumably using
+some network directory information like NIS or LDAP. When they log
+in and the user name is locally unknown, a new local user with the UID and
+GID information from the networked directory is created, and their password
+is cached on the local disk to allow them to log in also when disconnected
+from the network.
 
 For sites using a path to home directories on the form
 /site/hostname/partition/username/, it would be confusing if the local
@@ -14,7 +15,7 @@ the expected server.  To avoid this problem, the local user is created
 with /home/username/ as the home directory, allowing the remote file system
 to be automounted on /site/hostname/partition/.
 
-This package depend on pam_python from
+This package depends on pam_python from
 http://www.stuart.id.au/russell/files/pam_python
 
 Submit patches to debian-edu at lists.debian.org.


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debian/control
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@@ -18,13 +18,13 @@ Depends: ${misc:Depends},
          ${python3:Depends},
          libpam-python
 Suggests: libpam-ccreds | libpam-sss,
-Description: Configure PAM to create a local user if it do not exist already
+Description: Configure PAM to create a local user if it does not exist already
  When the user logs in for the first time, a local POSIX user account is
- created in /etc/passwd and primary group created in /etc/group, and a
+ created in /etc/passwd, a primary group is created in /etc/group, and a
  local home directory is created in /home.
  .
  This is useful on roaming computers when the password is set up to be
- cached by for example libpam-ccreds or sssd to allow login without
+ cached by, for example, libpam-ccreds or sssd to allow login without
  network connectivity using the password provided by a network
  authentication service like Kerberos or LDAP.
  .



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