[med-svn] r3962 - trunk/community/website

[Steffen Möller]

Author: moeller
Date: 2009-09-11 08:49:30 +0000 (Fri, 11 Sep 2009)
New Revision: 3962

Modified:
   trunk/community/website/organisations.xsl
Log:
Fine-tuned wording of intro to support.xml page.


Modified: trunk/community/website/organisations.xsl
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--- trunk/community/website/organisations.xsl	2009-09-11 08:14:54 UTC (rev 3961)
+++ trunk/community/website/organisations.xsl	2009-09-11 08:49:30 UTC (rev 3962)
@@ -92,19 +92,30 @@
     <xsl:for-each select="support">
      <h1>Sources for support for packages in Debian Med</h1>
 	<p>
-	  With Debian, there are several sources for support. Firstly, there is the maintainer of the packages, who can be reached with 
-	  "<tt>reportbug </tt><i>packagename</i>" from the command line. The maintainer is commonly the Debian Med mailing list, please
-          be aware that your email will be picked up by google and the public may learn about your activities this way.
+	  With Debian, there are several sources for support. Firstly,
+	  there is the maintainer of the packages, who can be reached
+	  with "<tt>reportbug </tt><i>packagename</i>" from the command
+	  line. The maintainer is commonly the Debian Med mailing list,
+	  please be aware that your email will be picked up by google
+	  and the public may learn about your activities this way.
 	</p>
 	<p>
-	  You may prefer to contact contributors of Debian Med directly or ask to be contacted on the mailing list. You can find
-	  partners for scientific projects, delegate some analyses, ask for some development or offer internships of various kinds
-	  for students. And yes, you'd need to pay for that.
+	  You may prefer to contact individual contributors to Debian
+	  Med directly or ask to be contacted on the mailing list. This
+	  way, you can find partners for scientific projects, delegate
+	  some analyses, ask for some development or offer internships
+	  of various kinds for students. And yes, it is not unlikely
+	  you'd be asked to pay for that.
 	</p>
 	<p>
-	  Finally, as a commercial entity you should be aware that you are not alone in your decision for Debian as a distribution. For
-	  a general support of Debian you will find contacts in your area on <a href="http://www.debian.org/consultants/">www.debian.org/consultants</a>.
-	  For support for our packages Debian Med that demand a rather highly specialised domain knowledge, the following companies came to our attention:
+	  Finally, as a commercial entity you should rest assured
+	  that you are not alone in your decision for Debian
+	  as a distribution. For a general support of Debian
+	  you will find professional contacts in your area on
+	  <a href="http://www.debian.org/consultants/">www.debian.org/consultants</a>.
+	  For support for our packages Debian Med that demand a rather
+	  highly specialised domain knowledge, the following companies
+	  came to our attention:
 	</p>
      <hr />
      <table border="0">