[med-svn] r13166 - trunk/community/papers/13_healthcafe

[Andreas Tille]

Author: tille
Date: 2013-03-09 18:22:53 +0000 (Sat, 09 Mar 2013)
New Revision: 13166

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   trunk/community/papers/13_healthcafe/paper-text.tex
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 -- on the solid and well known technical basis of the Debian
 distribution.
 
-Once the \DebianMed idea is explained this way and people got the idea
-they usually start dreaming:  Oh, that's nice I could start to work on
-my medical tasks without needing to spend any money any more, wonderful.
-Well, that's a nice dream but we need to wake you up, because we try to
-be honest and do not want to trick you with false promises.  Yes, you
-get the software with no cost for the license to use and this for sure
-will effectively reduce your costs. We also like to state that it is
-not only free of charge but high quality software which can even be
-proven by showing the code.  We will not play dirty tricks with your
-data and we will not be the stumbling stone when it comes to porting
-your data from one system to another.
+Once people have understood the \DebianMed idea they often begin to
+fantasise:  "Oh, that's nice.  I could accomplish my medical IT tasks
+without spending any money anymore, wonderful." Well, that is indeed a
+pleasant dream, but honesty requires us to provide you with a reality
+check.  Yes, you get the software to use with no licensing costs to pay,
+and this will certainly reduce your effective costs. We also should
+point out that it is not only free of charge but high quality as well,
+which can be verified by inspecting the code.  We will never play dirty
+tricks with your data and we will never be the stumbling stone when it
+comes to porting your data from one system to another.
 
 However, the truth is that on one side health care and on the other side
 computer science are complex fields of work and you will barely find