[med-svn] r13213 - trunk/community/papers/13_healthcafe

[Andreas Tille]

Author: tille
Date: 2013-03-21 21:10:37 +0000 (Thu, 21 Mar 2013)
New Revision: 13213

Modified:
   trunk/community/papers/13_healthcafe/debian-med-healthcafe.pdf
   trunk/community/papers/13_healthcafe/paper-text.tex
Log:
Corrections provided by some proofreader (thanks to Jenny Laverde)


Modified: trunk/community/papers/13_healthcafe/debian-med-healthcafe.pdf
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Modified: trunk/community/papers/13_healthcafe/paper-text.tex
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--- trunk/community/papers/13_healthcafe/paper-text.tex	2013-03-19 07:36:03 UTC (rev 13212)
+++ trunk/community/papers/13_healthcafe/paper-text.tex	2013-03-21 21:10:37 UTC (rev 13213)
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-When people hear the term `\DebianMed' the first time there are usually
+When people hear for the first time the term `\DebianMed' there are usually
 two kinds of misconceptions.  Let us dispel these in advance, so as to
 clarify subsequent discussion of the project.
 
@@ -13,8 +13,8 @@
 Ubuntu for additional software not belonging to the official
 distribution or something like that -- a Debian Pure Blend (as the term
 'pure' implies) is Debian itself and if you have received Debian you
-have full \DebianMed at your disposal.  There are other Debian Pure
-Blends like Debian Science, Debian Edu, Debian GIS and others.
+have full \DebianMed at your disposal.  There are other 
+Blends inside Debian like Debian Science, Debian Edu, Debian GIS and others.
 
 People working in the health care professions sometimes acquire
 another misconception about \DebianMed, namely that \DebianMed is some