[med-svn] r23775 - trunk/community/releasenotes/stretch

[Andreas Tille]

Author: tille
Date: 2017-06-03 19:08:16 +0000 (Sat, 03 Jun 2017)
New Revision: 23775

Modified:
   trunk/community/releasenotes/stretch/release-notes.patch
Log:
Revised version by Justin B Rye <justin.byam.rye at gmail.com>


Modified: trunk/community/releasenotes/stretch/release-notes.patch
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--- trunk/community/releasenotes/stretch/release-notes.patch	2017-05-31 13:41:51 UTC (rev 23774)
+++ trunk/community/releasenotes/stretch/release-notes.patch	2017-06-03 19:08:16 UTC (rev 23775)
@@ -1,17 +1,17 @@
 <title>News from Debian Med Blend</title>
 
     <para>Besides several new packages and updates for software targeting
-    life sciences and medicine the Debian Med team has again put a focus on
-    the quality of the provided packages.  In a GSoC project and an
-    Outreachy project two students worked hard to add Continuous Integration
-    support to the packages with the highest usage statistics due to
-    popularity contest.  The latest Debian Med sprint in Bukarest was also
-    targeting at testing packages.
+    life sciences and medicine, the Debian Med team has again put a focus on 
+    the quality of the provided packages.  In a GSoC project and an 
+    Outreachy project, two students worked hard to add Continuous Integration 
+    support to the packages with the highest popularity-contest usage
+    statistics.  The latest Debian Med sprint in Bucharest also
+    concentrated on package testing.
     </para><para>
-    To install packages maintained by the Debian Med team install the
-    metapackages named med-* which are at version 3.0.1 for Debian Stretch
+    To install packages maintained by the Debian Med team, install the
+    metapackages named med-*, which are at version 3.0.1 for Debian stretch.
     Feel free to visit the
     <ulink url="http://blends.debian.org/med/tasks">Debian Med tasks pages</ulink>
-    to see the full range of biological and medical software inside Debian.
+    to see the full range of biological and medical software available in Debian.
     </para>