[Secure-testing-commits] r5083 - doc

[Neil McGovern]

Author: neilm
Date: 2006-12-06 21:39:13 +0100 (Wed, 06 Dec 2006)
New Revision: 5083

Modified:
   doc/narrative_introduction
Log:
Fix typos

Modified: doc/narrative_introduction
===================================================================
--- doc/narrative_introduction	2006-12-06 20:27:04 UTC (rev 5082)
+++ doc/narrative_introduction	2006-12-06 20:39:13 UTC (rev 5083)
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@
 processing them so that the tracking data is correct. Read on for how we
 do this.
 
-Processing TODO entires
+Processing TODO entries
 -----------------------
 The Mitre update typically manifests in new CVE entries. So what we do
 is to update our svn repository and then edit data/CVE/list and look
@@ -150,9 +150,9 @@
 
 Packages in the archive
 -----------------------
-If it is a package in Debian you look to see if the package is
-affected or not (sometimes newer versions that have the fixes have
-already been uploaded). 
+If it is a package in Debian, look to see if the package is affected or 
+not (sometimes newer versions that have the fixes have already been 
+uploaded). 
 
 If the version has been fixed already, note the package name and the
 Debian version that fixes it and assign a severity level to it, for
@@ -162,9 +162,9 @@
 with any Admin ...)
    - gallery 1.5-2 (medium)
 
-If it hasn't been fixed, I will determine if there has been a bug filed
-about the issue, and if not, I will file one and then note it in the
-list (again with a severity level):
+If it hasn't been fixed, we determine if there has been a bug filed
+about the issue, and if not, file one and then note it in the list
+(again with a severity level):
 
 CVE-2005-3054 (fopen_wrappers.c in PHP 4.4.0, and possibly other
 versions, does not ...)