[Secure-testing-commits] r6939 - doc

[micah at alioth.debian.org]

Author: micah
Date: 2007-10-13 17:43:58 +0000 (Sat, 13 Oct 2007)
New Revision: 6939

Modified:
   doc/bits_2007_10_x
Log:
a few minor tweaks

Modified: doc/bits_2007_10_x
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--- doc/bits_2007_10_x	2007-10-13 17:06:44 UTC (rev 6938)
+++ doc/bits_2007_10_x	2007-10-13 17:43:58 UTC (rev 6939)
@@ -14,14 +14,12 @@
 
 Thanks to an increased size of our team, Debian Lenny is in good shape with
 respect to security and has been so for some time. We expect to be able to
-keep up this level of security support (at least) until the release of
-Debian lenny.
+keep up this level of security support (at least) until the release of Lenny.
 
-There have been some problems with security support for testing in
-the weeks immediatly after the release of etch. We hope to improve our
-processes so that we won't run into the same problems after the release
-of lenny. There will be another announcement about the state of these
-efforts well before lenny's release.
+In the weeks immediately after the release of Etch there were some security 
+support problems for testing. We hope to improve our processes so that we won't 
+run into the same problems after the release of Lenny. There will be another 
+announcement about the state of these efforts well before Lenny's release.
 
 Our web page[0] has been updated to reflect the current status.
 
@@ -83,8 +81,8 @@
 Efforts to fix security issues in testing
 -----------------------------------------
 
-As already mentioned, the main efforts involved in keeping testing
-secure is by letting fixed packages migrate from unstable. In order to
+Our efforts to keep testing secure are primarily focused around
+letting fixed packages migrate from unstable. In order to
 ensure this migration process, we are in close contact with the
 release team and request priority bumps to speed up the
 migration. Sometimes a package is kept from migrating due to a