[Secure-testing-commits] r16970 - doc

[Michael Gilbert]

Author: gilbert-guest
Date: 2011-07-23 03:07:06 +0000 (Sat, 23 Jul 2011)
New Revision: 16970

Modified:
   doc/narrative_introduction
Log:
fix alioth discription in narrative doc

Modified: doc/narrative_introduction
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--- doc/narrative_introduction	2011-07-22 22:22:25 UTC (rev 16969)
+++ doc/narrative_introduction	2011-07-23 03:07:06 UTC (rev 16970)
@@ -23,20 +23,21 @@
 
 The best way to understand is to check out our repository from
 subversion so you have the files on your computer and can follow along
-at home. To do this, you need an Alioth account, and then you just
-need to do the following:
+at home. To do this you just need to do the following:
 
 svn co svn+ssh://<alioth user name>@svn.debian.org/svn/secure-testing
 
-This will check out our working repository after asking for your alioth
-password twice. This is normal and to be expected. After successfully
-downloading, you will have a new directory called secure-testing. Inside
-this directory are a number of subdirectories. The name of the Subversion
-repository is historical, the tracker is not specially related to
-testing-security, but for Debian security at large.
-The data directory is where we do most of our work. If you don't have
-an Alioth account, you can create one at:
+This will check out the working repository (given that you already have
+an alioth account and public key authentication already set up, see
+http://wiki.debian.org/Alioth/SSH).  After successfully downloading,
+you will have a new directory called secure-testing.  Inside this directory
+are a number of subdirectories.  The data directory is where we do most of
+our work.  Note that the name of the Subversion repository is historical;
+the tracker is not specially related to testing-security, but for Debian
+security at large.
 
+If you don't have an Alioth account, you can create one at:
+
 https://alioth.debian.org/account/register.php
 
 You can then join the team by clicking the 'Request to join' link at: