[Openstack-devel] Bug#708661: [RFR] templates://sftpcloudfs/{templates}

[Christian PERRIER]

Please find, for review, the debconf templates and packages descriptions for the sftpcloudfs source package.

This review will last from Sunday, June 02, 2013 to Wednesday, June 12, 2013.

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Rationale:
--- sftpcloudfs.old/debian/templates	2013-05-17 11:01:11.305787034 +0300
+++ sftpcloudfs/debian/templates	2013-06-02 19:19:13.140640455 +0300
@@ -1,14 +1,12 @@
 Template: sftpcloudfs/auth-url
 Type: string
 Default: https://auth.api.rackspacecloud.com/v1.0
-_Description: Content of the auth-url directive:
- In order to authenticate it's users, SFTPCloudFS needs to connect to an
- authentication server (eg RackSpace Cloud Files, OpenStack). Enter the
- URL of that server.
+_Description: Authentication server URL:
+ In order to authenticate its users, SFTPCloudFS needs to connect to an
+ authentication server (such as RackSpace Cloud Files or OpenStack).
+ Please enter the URL of that server.
  .
- For Rackspace in US, choose https://auth.api.rackspacecloud.com/v1.0
- .
- For Rackspace in UK, choose https://lon.auth.api.rackspacecloud.com/v1.0
- .
- If you use Swift, something like this will do: https://example.com/v1.0
- (or use the IP address directly).
+ URL examples:
+  * Rackspace in USA: https://auth.api.rackspacecloud.com/v1.0
+  * Rackspace in UK:  https://lon.auth.api.rackspacecloud.com/v1.0
+  * Swift: URLs such as https://example.com/v1.0

One "Please enter" again.

Group URL examples in an enumeration.

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Template: sftpcloudfs/auth-url
Type: string
Default: https://auth.api.rackspacecloud.com/v1.0
_Description: Authentication server URL:
 In order to authenticate its users, SFTPCloudFS needs to connect to an
 authentication server (such as RackSpace Cloud Files or OpenStack).
 Please enter the URL of that server.
 .
 URL examples:
  * Rackspace in USA: https://auth.api.rackspacecloud.com/v1.0
  * Rackspace in UK:  https://lon.auth.api.rackspacecloud.com/v1.0
  * Swift: URLs such as https://example.com/v1.0
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--- sftpcloudfs.old/debian/templates	2013-05-17 11:01:11.305787034 +0300
+++ sftpcloudfs/debian/templates	2013-06-02 19:19:13.140640455 +0300
@@ -1,14 +1,12 @@
 Template: sftpcloudfs/auth-url
 Type: string
 Default: https://auth.api.rackspacecloud.com/v1.0
-_Description: Content of the auth-url directive:
- In order to authenticate it's users, SFTPCloudFS needs to connect to an
- authentication server (eg RackSpace Cloud Files, OpenStack). Enter the
- URL of that server.
+_Description: Authentication server URL:
+ In order to authenticate its users, SFTPCloudFS needs to connect to an
+ authentication server (such as RackSpace Cloud Files or OpenStack).
+ Please enter the URL of that server.
  .
- For Rackspace in US, choose https://auth.api.rackspacecloud.com/v1.0
- .
- For Rackspace in UK, choose https://lon.auth.api.rackspacecloud.com/v1.0
- .
- If you use Swift, something like this will do: https://example.com/v1.0
- (or use the IP address directly).
+ URL examples:
+  * Rackspace in USA: https://auth.api.rackspacecloud.com/v1.0
+  * Rackspace in UK:  https://lon.auth.api.rackspacecloud.com/v1.0
+  * Swift: URLs such as https://example.com/v1.0
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Source: sftpcloudfs
Section: net
Priority: extra
Maintainer: PKG OpenStack <openstack-devel at lists.alioth.debian.org>
Uploaders: Loic Dachary (OuoU) <loic at debian.org>,
           Julien Danjou <acid at debian.org>,
           Thomas Goirand <zigo at debian.org>,
           Ghe Rivero <ghe.rivero at stackops.com>,
           Mehdi Abaakouk <sileht at sileht.net>
Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 9), python-setuptools, python-all (>= 2.6.6-3~), openstack-pkg-tools, po-debconf
Standards-Version: 3.9.4
Vcs-Browser: http://anonscm.debian.org/gitweb/?p=openstack/sftpcloudfs.git
Vcs-Git: git://anonscm.debian.org/openstack/sftpcloudfs.git
Homepage: https://github.com/Memset/sftpcloudfs

Package: sftpcloudfs
Architecture: all
Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~)
Depends: ${python:Depends}, ${misc:Depends},
 adduser,
 debconf,
 python-ftp-cloudfs (>= 0.19),
 openssh-client,
 python-paramiko,
 python-daemon,
 python-cloudfiles,
 python-memcache
Description: SFTP interface to Rackspace Cloud Files and OpenStack Object Storage
 SFTP (Secure File Transfer Protocol) interface to Rackspace Cloud Files and
 OpenStack Object Storage, providing a service that acts as a proxy between a
 SFTP client and a remote files/storage service.
 .
 The username/password pair used to open the SFTP session is validated using the
 authentication service of the files/storage service to get an authentication
 token.
 .
 The communication between the client and the SFTP daemon is encrypted all the
 time, and the SFTP service supports HTTPS communication with the remote
 files/storage service.
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