[Openstack-devel] Bug#708747: [BTS#708747] templates://ceilometer/{ceilometer-api.templates} : Final update for English review

[Christian PERRIER]

Dear Debian maintainer,

On Wednesday, May 22, 2013, I notified you of the beginning of a review process
concerning debconf templates for ceilometer.

The debian-l10n-english contributors have now reviewed these templates,
and the final proposed changes are attached to this update to the
original bug report.

Please review the suggested changes, and if you have any
objections, let me know in the next 3 days.

However, please try to avoid uploading ceilometer with these changes
right now.

The second phase of this process will begin on Tuesday, June 18, 2013, when I will
coordinate updates to translations of debconf templates.

The existing translators will be notified of the changes: they will
receive an updated PO file for their language.

Simultaneously, a general call for new translations will be sent to
the debian-i18n mailing list.

Both these calls for translations will request updates to be sent as
individual bug reports. That will probably trigger a lot of bug
reports against your package, but these should be easier to deal with.

The call for translation updates and new translations will run until
about Tuesday, July 09, 2013. Please avoid uploading a package with fixed or changed
debconf templates and/or translation updates in the meantime. Of
course, other changes are safe.

Please note that this is an approximative delay, which depends on my
own availability to process this work and is influenced by the fact
that I simultaneously work on many packages.

Around Wednesday, July 10, 2013, I will contact you again and will send a final patch
summarizing all the updates (changes to debconf templates,
updates to debconf translations and new debconf translations).

Again, thanks for your attention and cooperation.


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# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
# team
#
# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
# debian-l10n-english at lists.debian.org for advice.
#
# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.

Template: ceilometer/register-endpoint
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Register Ceilometer in the Keystone endpoint catalog?
 Each OpenStack service (each API) should be registered in order to be
 accessible. This is done using "keystone service-create" and "keystone
 endpoint-create". This can be done automatically now.
 .
 Note that you will need to have an up and running Keystone server on which to
 connect using the Keystone authentication token.

Template: ceilometer/keystone-ip
Type: string
_Description: Keystone server IP address:
 Please enter the IP address of the Keystone server, so that ceilometer-api can
 contact Keystone to do the Ceilometer service and endpoint creation.

Template: ceilometer/keystone-auth-token
Type: password
_Description: Keystone authentication token:
 To configure its endpoint in Keystone, ceilometer-api needs the Keystone
 authentication token.

Template: ceilometer/endpoint-ip
Type: string
_Description: Ceilometer endpoint IP address:
 Please enter the IP address that will be used to contact Ceilometer.
 .
 This IP address should be accessible from the clients that will use this
 service, so if you are installing a public cloud, this should be a public
 IP address.

Template: ceilometer/region-name
Type: string
Default: regionOne
_Description: Name of the region to register:
 OpenStack supports using availability zones, with each region representing
 a location. Please enter the zone that you wish to use when registering the
 endpoint.
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Source: ceilometer
Section: web
Priority: optional
Maintainer: PKG OpenStack <openstack-devel at lists.alioth.debian.org>
Uploaders: Loic Dachary (OuoU) <loic at debian.org>,
           Julien Danjou <acid at debian.org>,
           Thomas Goirand <zigo at debian.org>,
           Ghe Rivero <ghe.rivero at stackops.com>,
           Mehdi Abaakouk <sileht at sileht.net>
Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 9),
 po-debconf,
 python-all (>= 2.6.6-3~),
 openstack-pkg-tools
Build-Depends-Indep: pep8,
 python-argparse,
 python-anyjson (>= 0.2.4),
 python-babel,
 python-coverage,
 python-docutils,
 python-eventlet,
 python-extras,
 python-flask (>= 0.9),
 python-glance (>= 2013.1~),
 python-glanceclient (>= 1:0.6),
 python-iso8601,
 python-keystoneclient (>= 1:0.2.3),
 python-kombu,  
 python-lockfile,
 python-lxml,
 python-ming,
 python-mock,
 python-mox,   
 python-netaddr,
 python-netifaces,
 python-nose,
 python-nova (>= 2013.1~),
 python-novaclient (>= 2:2.6.10),
 python-oslo.config,
 python-pecan (>= 0.2.1),
 python-pymongo,
 python-requests,
 python-setuptools-git,
 python-sphinx,
 python-sqlalchemy (>= 0.7.3),
 python-sqlalchemy (<< 0.8.0~),
 python-stevedore (>= 0.6),
 python-swiftclient,
 python-unittest2,
 python-webob (>= 1.2),
 python-wsme,
 python-yaml
Standards-Version: 3.9.3
Vcs-Browser: http://anonscm.debian.org/gitweb/?p=openstack/ceilometer.git;a=summary
Vcs-Git: git://anonscm.debian.org/openstack/ceilometer.git
Homepage: http://wiki.openstack.org/Ceilometer

Package: python-ceilometer
Section: python
Architecture: all
Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~)
Depends: ${python:Depends}, ${misc:Depends},
 libjs-jquery,
 python-argparse,
 python-anyjson (>= 0.2.4),
 python-eventlet,
 python-extras,
 python-flask (>= 0.9),
 python-glanceclient (>= 1:0.6),
 python-greenlet (>= 0.4),
 python-keystoneclient (>= 1:0.2.3),
 python-iso8601,
 python-kombu,
 python-lockfile,
 python-lxml,
 python-netaddr,
 python-novaclient (>= 2:2.6.10),
 python-oslo.config,
 python-pecan (>= 0.2.1),
 python-pymongo (>= 2.2),
 python-requests,
 python-sqlalchemy (>= 0.7.3),
 python-sqlalchemy (<< 0.8.0~),
 python-stevedore (>= 0.6),
 python-swiftclient,
 python-webob (>= 1.2),
 python-yaml
Description: OpenStack efficient metering counters system - Python libraries
 Ceilometer aims to deliver a Single Point Of Contact for billing systems,
 providing all the counters they need to establish customer billing, across
 all current and future OpenStack components. The delivery of counters must be
 traceable and auditable, the counters must be easily extensible to support new
 projects, and agents doing data collections should be independent of the
 overall system.
 .
 This package contains the Python libraries that are needed for all parts of
 Ceilometer.

Package: ceilometer-common
Architecture: all
Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~)
Depends: python-ceilometer (= ${binary:Version}), ${python:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, adduser
Provides: ${python:Provides}
Description: OpenStack efficient metering counters system - common files
 Ceilometer aims to deliver a Single Point Of Contact for billing systems,
 providing all the counters they need to establish customer billing, across
 all current and future OpenStack components. The delivery of counters must be
 traceable and auditable, the counters must be easily extensible to support new
 projects, and agents doing data collections should be independent of the
 overall system.
 .
 This package contains files that are needed for all parts of Ceilometer.

Package: ceilometer-collector
Architecture: all
Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~)
Depends: ${ostack-lsb-base}, ceilometer-common (= ${binary:Version}), ${python:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
Description: OpenStack efficient metering counters system - collector service
 Ceilometer aims to deliver a Single Point Of Contact for billing systems,
 providing all the counters they need to establish customer billing, across
 all current and future OpenStack components. The delivery of counters must be
 traceable and auditable, the counters must be easily extensible to support new
 projects, and agents doing data collections should be independent of the
 overall system.
 .
 This package contains the collector service.

Package: ceilometer-api
Architecture: all
Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~)
Depends: adduser, debconf, ${ostack-lsb-base}, ceilometer-common (= ${binary:Version}), ${python:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
Description: OpenStack efficient metering counters system (API service)
 Ceilometer aims to deliver a Single Point Of Contact for billing systems,
 providing all the counters they need to establish customer billing, across
 all current and future OpenStack components. The delivery of counters must be
 traceable and auditable, the counters must be easily extensible to support new
 projects, and agents doing data collections should be independent of the
 overall system.
 .
 This package contains the API service.

Package: ceilometer-agent-compute
Architecture: all
Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~)
Depends: ${ostack-lsb-base}, ceilometer-common (= ${binary:Version}), ${python:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
Description: OpenStack efficient metering counters system - compute agent
 Ceilometer aims to deliver a Single Point Of Contact for billing systems,
 providing all the counters they need to establish customer billing, across
 all current and future OpenStack components. The delivery of counters must be
 traceable and auditable, the counters must be easily extensible to support new
 projects, and agents doing data collections should be independent of the
 overall system.
 .
 This package contains the compute agent.

Package: ceilometer-agent-central
Architecture: all
Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~)
Depends: ${ostack-lsb-base}, ceilometer-common (= ${binary:Version}), ${python:Depends},
 ${misc:Depends}
Description: OpenStack efficient metering counters system - central agent
 Ceilometer aims to deliver a Single Point Of Contact for billing systems,
 providing all the counters they need to establish customer billing, across
 all current and future OpenStack components. The delivery of counters must be
 traceable and auditable, the counters must be easily extensible to support new
 projects, and agents doing data collections should be independent of the
 overall system.
 .
 This package contains the central agent.
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--- ceilometer.old/debian/ceilometer-api.templates	2013-05-18 12:40:43.837128341 +0200
+++ ceilometer/debian/ceilometer-api.templates	2013-06-15 08:48:57.792736954 +0200
@@ -1,31 +1,39 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-english at lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: ceilometer/register-endpoint
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Register Ceilometer in the keystone endpoint catalog?
- Each Openstack services (each API) should be registered in order to be
+_Description: Register Ceilometer in the Keystone endpoint catalog?
+ Each OpenStack service (each API) should be registered in order to be
  accessible. This is done using "keystone service-create" and "keystone
- endpoint-create". Select if you want to run these commands now.
+ endpoint-create". This can be done automatically now.
  .
- Note that you will need to have an up and running keystone server on which to
- connect using the Keystone auth token.
+ Note that you will need to have an up and running Keystone server on which to
+ connect using the Keystone authentication token.
 
 Template: ceilometer/keystone-ip
 Type: string
-_Description: Keystone IP address:
- Enter the IP address of your keystone server, so that ceilometer-api can
+_Description: Keystone server IP address:
+ Please enter the IP address of the Keystone server, so that ceilometer-api can
  contact Keystone to do the Ceilometer service and endpoint creation.
 
 Template: ceilometer/keystone-auth-token
 Type: password
-_Description: Keystone Auth Token:
- To configure its endpoint in Keystone, ceilometer-api needs the Keystone auth
- token.
+_Description: Keystone authentication token:
+ To configure its endpoint in Keystone, ceilometer-api needs the Keystone
+ authentication token.
 
 Template: ceilometer/endpoint-ip
 Type: string
 _Description: Ceilometer endpoint IP address:
- Enter the IP address that will be used to contact Ceilometer (eg: the
- Ceilometer endpoint IP address).
+ Please enter the IP address that will be used to contact Ceilometer.
  .
  This IP address should be accessible from the clients that will use this
  service, so if you are installing a public cloud, this should be a public
@@ -35,6 +43,6 @@
 Type: string
 Default: regionOne
 _Description: Name of the region to register:
- Openstack can be used using availability zones, with each region representing
+ OpenStack supports using availability zones, with each region representing
  a location. Please enter the zone that you wish to use when registering the
  endpoint.
--- ceilometer.old/debian/control	2013-05-18 12:40:43.837128341 +0200
+++ ceilometer/debian/control	2013-06-12 19:14:34.810825714 +0200
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@
  python-yaml
 Description: OpenStack efficient metering counters system - Python libraries
  Ceilometer aims to deliver a Single Point Of Contact for billing systems,
- providing all the counters they need to establish customer billing, accross
+ providing all the counters they need to establish customer billing, across
  all current and future OpenStack components. The delivery of counters must be
  traceable and auditable, the counters must be easily extensible to support new
  projects, and agents doing data collections should be independent of the
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@
 Provides: ${python:Provides}
 Description: OpenStack efficient metering counters system - common files
  Ceilometer aims to deliver a Single Point Of Contact for billing systems,
- providing all the counters they need to establish customer billing, accross
+ providing all the counters they need to establish customer billing, across
  all current and future OpenStack components. The delivery of counters must be
  traceable and auditable, the counters must be easily extensible to support new
  projects, and agents doing data collections should be independent of the
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@
 Depends: ${ostack-lsb-base}, ceilometer-common (= ${binary:Version}), ${python:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Description: OpenStack efficient metering counters system - collector service
  Ceilometer aims to deliver a Single Point Of Contact for billing systems,
- providing all the counters they need to establish customer billing, accross
+ providing all the counters they need to establish customer billing, across
  all current and future OpenStack components. The delivery of counters must be
  traceable and auditable, the counters must be easily extensible to support new
  projects, and agents doing data collections should be independent of the
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@
 Depends: adduser, debconf, ${ostack-lsb-base}, ceilometer-common (= ${binary:Version}), ${python:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Description: OpenStack efficient metering counters system (API service)
  Ceilometer aims to deliver a Single Point Of Contact for billing systems,
- providing all the counters they need to establish customer billing, accross
+ providing all the counters they need to establish customer billing, across
  all current and future OpenStack components. The delivery of counters must be
  traceable and auditable, the counters must be easily extensible to support new
  projects, and agents doing data collections should be independent of the
@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@
 Depends: ${ostack-lsb-base}, ceilometer-common (= ${binary:Version}), ${python:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Description: OpenStack efficient metering counters system - compute agent
  Ceilometer aims to deliver a Single Point Of Contact for billing systems,
- providing all the counters they need to establish customer billing, accross
+ providing all the counters they need to establish customer billing, across
  all current and future OpenStack components. The delivery of counters must be
  traceable and auditable, the counters must be easily extensible to support new
  projects, and agents doing data collections should be independent of the
@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@
  ${misc:Depends}
 Description: OpenStack efficient metering counters system - central agent
  Ceilometer aims to deliver a Single Point Of Contact for billing systems,
- providing all the counters they need to establish customer billing, accross
+ providing all the counters they need to establish customer billing, across
  all current and future OpenStack components. The delivery of counters must be
  traceable and auditable, the counters must be easily extensible to support new
  projects, and agents doing data collections should be independent of the
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