[Openstack-devel] Bug#737819: nova: Newly introduced templates should get a review by debian-l10n-english

[Christian Perrier]

Source: nova
Severity: normal

Last release of Nova includes:

  * Configures Neutron credentials through Debconf.

....but the wording of the new templates doesn't fit the style of
other templates.

The "funny" part is that these templates do have the following warning:

# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
# team
#
# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
# debian-l10n-english at lists.debian.org for advice.
#
# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.

Anyway, here are the faulty templates....and my proposed rewording
just after them.


Template: nova/my-ip
Type: string
_Description: Value for my_ip:
 Enter the IP address that will be set in the my_ip directive of nova.conf.

Template: nova/neutron_url
Type: string
Default: http://127.0.0.1:9696
_Description: Value for neutron_url:
 Enter the URL of your Neutron server.

Template: nova/neutron_admin_tenant_name
Type: string
Default: admin
_Description: Neutron admin tenant name:
 Nova needs to be able to communicate with Neutron through Keystone. Therefore
 Nova needs to know the Neutron admin tenant, username and password.
 .
 Enter the name of the admin tenant for Neutron.

Template: nova/neutron_admin_username
Type: string
Default: admin
_Description: Neutron admin username:
 Enter the username for Neutron.

Template: nova/neutron_admin_password
Type: password
_Description: Neutron admin password:
 Enter the password for the admin username of Neutron.


Reworded as:

(please note that I think something should be said about what the hell
is the "my_ip directive" and users should be given a clue of what they
should put there but I have no bloody idea myself)

Template: nova/my-ip
Type: string
_Description: Value for my_ip:
 Please enter the IP address that will be set in the my_ip directive of nova.conf.

Template: nova/neutron_url
Type: string
Default: http://127.0.0.1:9696
_Description: Neutron server URL:
 Please enter the URL of the Neutron server.

Template: nova/neutron_admin_tenant_name
Type: string
Default: admin
_Description: Neutron admin tenant name:
 Nova needs to be able to communicate with Neutron through Keystone. Therefore
 Nova needs to know the Neutron admin tenant, username and password.
 .
 Please enter the name of the admin tenant for Neutron.

Template: nova/neutron_admin_username
Type: string
Default: admin
_Description: Neutron administrator username:
 Nova needs to be able to communicate with Neutron through Keystone. Therefore
 Nova needs to know the Neutron admin tenant, username and password.
 .
 Please enter the username of the Neutron administrator.

Template: nova/neutron_admin_password
Type: password
_Description: Neutron administrator password:
 Nova needs to be able to communicate with Neutron through Keystone. Therefore
 Nova needs to know the Neutron admin tenant, username and password.
 .
 Please enter the password of the Neutron administrator.