[Pkg-crosswire-devel] Bug#539880: xiphos: long description no sentence

[Gerfried Fuchs]

Package: xiphos
Version: 3.1-1
Severity: minor

        Hi!

 It would be nice if the long description of your package could consist
of full sentences[1], the snippet in the first paragraph is missing its
subject, "A bible study program for GNOME using the SWORD library" isn't
really a full sentence, and neither is "Features:". :)

 Furthermore, I'd like to suggest to prefix your feature list with
bulleting markers like * or -, this will allow package renderers like
the one in aptitude to recognize it as a list and render it accordingly.

 So long, and thanks for your great work nevertheless!
Rhonda
[1] <http://www.us.debian.org/doc/developers-reference/best-pkging-practices#bpp-pkg-desc>