[Pkg-fonts-devel] RFC: fonts-kristi

[Christian PERRIER]

Quoting Gioele Barabucci (gioele at svario.it):
> On 04/10/2015 11:06, Fabian Greffrath wrote:
> >Am Sonntag, den 04.10.2015, 00:39 +0200 schrieb Gioele Barabucci:
> >>Please let me know if everything is OK.
> >
> >I have only one complaint: I find "Kristy font" as description for a
> >package called "fonts-kristy" rather unhelpful.
> 
> Hi Fabian,
> 
> thank you for the review; I fixed the description. I will use something more
> descriptive in my future packages. Just beware that the repo contains other
> font packages with the same kind of description.

-Description: Kristi font
+Description: Casual cursive script typeface with a "felt-tip pen" feel
  Kristi is a free TrueType font designed by Birgit Pulk.
- It is a calligraphy font inspired by old chancery typefaces. The font
- simulates writing with a felt-tip pen.
+ It is a casual cursive script typeface inspired by old chancery typefaces.
+ The font simulates writing with a felt-tip pen.

(debian-l10n-english hat ON)

I think the description can slightly be improved:

- do NOT start the short description with a capital letter --> "casual
cursive..."

- instead of "it is a calligraphy..." which doesn't really sound
native English, maybe use "This package provides a calligraphy...."


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