Bug#524022: ITP: tuxanci -- czechoslovak multiplatform action game like Bulanci

[Steve Langasek]

On Tue, Apr 14, 2009 at 11:43:31AM +0200, Evgeni Golov wrote:
> Package: wnpp
> Severity: wishlist
> Owner: Debian Games Team <pkg-games-devel at lists.alioth.debian.org>

> * Package name    : tuxanci
>   Version         : 0.21.0
>   Upstream Author : Tomáš Chvátal (scarab) <tomas.chvatal at gmail.com>
> * URL             : http://www.tuxanci.org/
> * License         : GPL-2+
>   Programming Lang: C
>   Description     : czechoslovak multiplatform action game like Bulanci

"Czechoslovak" is an adjective referring to the defunct union of
Czechoslovakia.  I think you want just "Czech" here (note that it should be
capitalized in English).

>  Tuxánci is a first cushion shooter based on well-known Czech game Bulánci.

"first cushion" -> "first-person"?

s/well-known/the well-known/

>  Goal of this game is to shoot the enemy penguin before he does so.
>  (this has to be improved, but upstreams homepage is mainly in czech currently)

s/Goal/The goal/

Cheers,
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