Bug#387700: grub: Errors in NEWS.Debian.gz

[Frans Pop]

Package: grub
Version: 0.97-16
Severity: minor

> grub (0.97-16) unstable; urgency=low
>
>   grub-install and update-grub has change location.

s/change/changed/

>   There's a wrapper available in /sbin to keep backward compatibility but
>   it'll be remove once Etch is release as stable. You _must_ edit your

s/remove/removed/
s/release/released/

>   /etc/kernel-img.conf and remove the full paths from it. For example:

This is not what you tell people to do below: there are still full paths, 
only they are different full paths!
So I'd suggest:
"/etc/kernel-img.conf and update the path to update-grub. For example:"
(Unless of course the example is wrong...)

>   ,----[ /etc/kernel-img.conf ]

I don't really understand why the , is here at the beginning of the line.

>   | ...
>   | postinst_hook = /sbin/update-grub
>   | postrm_hook   = /sbin/update-grub
>
>   `----

Same for the `.

>   Should be change to:

s/change/changed/

>   ,----[ /etc/kernel-img.conf ]
>
>   | ...
>   | postinst_hook = /usr/sbin/update-grub
>   | postrm_hook   = /usr/sbin/update-grub
>
>   `----
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