[Git][java-team/java-policy][master] 2 commits: Advice is uncountable ⇒ cannot be plural

[Andrej Shadura]

Andrej Shadura pushed to branch master at Debian Java Maintainers / java-policy


Commits:
e7b78722 by Andrej Shadura at 2018-09-24T08:23:15Z
Advice is uncountable ⇒ cannot be plural

- - - - -
b44eb4b1 by Andrej Shadura at 2018-09-24T08:24:01Z
Rephrase a little bit

- - - - -


1 changed file:

- debian-java-policy.xml


Changes:

=====================================
debian-java-policy.xml
=====================================
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@
       <para>
 	This is the Java policy for Debian. It begins with a
 	background description, continues with the real policy, some
-	issues to discuss and ends with some advices to Java packagers.
+	issues to discuss and ends with some advice to Java packagers.
       </para>
       <para>
 	The policy covers Java virtual machines, Java compilers, Java
@@ -512,11 +512,11 @@
     </itemizedlist>
   </chapter>
   
-  <chapter id="advices">
-    <title>Advices to Java packagers</title>
+  <chapter id="advice">
+    <title>Advice to Java packagers</title>
     
     <para>
-      Warning: These are just advices, they are not part of the policy.
+      Warning: These recommendations are just advisory, they are not part of the policy.
     </para>
     
     <itemizedlist>
@@ -532,8 +532,9 @@
       
       <listitem>
 	<para>
-	  Many calls in <filename>debian/rules</filename> can be removed
-	  which are meaningless for Java, like dh_strip and dh_shlibdeps.
+	  In hand-written <filename>debian/rules</filename>, a lot of calls
+	  can be removed since they are useless for Java packages, e.g.
+	  dh_strip and dh_shlibdeps.
 	</para>
       </listitem>
       



View it on GitLab: https://salsa.debian.org/java-team/java-policy/compare/0bb64406659f2b47c9a1dc9acc8124e773b18561...b44eb4b17a80f973a7f5f1dabf538b4eb5d6d27a

-- 
View it on GitLab: https://salsa.debian.org/java-team/java-policy/compare/0bb64406659f2b47c9a1dc9acc8124e773b18561...b44eb4b17a80f973a7f5f1dabf538b4eb5d6d27a
You're receiving this email because of your account on salsa.debian.org.
-------------- next part --------------
An HTML attachment was scrubbed...
URL: <http://alioth-lists.debian.net/pipermail/pkg-java-commits/attachments/20180924/9405af99/attachment.html>