Bug#661980: jenkins-memory-monitor: [PATCH] debian/control: Fix grammar in description

[Paul Menzel]

Package: jenkins-memory-monitor
Version: 1.5-1
Severity: normal
Tags: patch

Dear Debian folks,


I hope the inlined patch applicable with `git am --scissors` is useful.

I am not sure about the s/jenkins/Jenkin’s/ change. Additionally reading
the description I am not sure about »integration for« and if it should
be changed to »integration of«.

Maybe the Debian English team(?) (Smith(?)) can review the description.


Thanks,

Paul

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From 27ecae8262bb20dc55b705053de8b2bc402db8c1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Paul Menzel <pm.debian at googlemail.com>
Date: Sat, 3 Mar 2012 09:01:58 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] debian/control: Fix grammar in description

---
 debian/changelog |    7 +++++++
 debian/control   |   12 ++++++------
 2 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/debian/changelog b/debian/changelog
index c4f7442..cc329ac 100644
--- a/debian/changelog
+++ b/debian/changelog
@@ -1,3 +1,10 @@
+jenkins-memory-monitor (1.7-1.1) unstable; urgency=low
+
+  * Non-maintainer upload.
+  * debian/control: Fix grammar in description
+
+ -- Paul Menzel <pm.debian at googlemail.com>  Sat, 03 Mar 2012 09:02:37 +0100
+
 jenkins-memory-monitor (1.7-1) unstable; urgency=low
 
   * New upstream release.
diff --git a/debian/control b/debian/control
index 1511c9b..7014e86 100644
--- a/debian/control
+++ b/debian/control
@@ -22,9 +22,9 @@ Architecture: all
 Depends: ${maven:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Recommends: ${maven:OptionalDepends}
 Description: Jenkins native integration for monitoring memory usage.
- This library provide native integration for monitoring memory and
- swap usage from with Java code. It is used by the Jenkins CI
- application to monitor these statistics on jenkins master and
+ This library provides native integration for monitoring memory and
+ swap usage from within Java code. It is used by the Jenkins CI
+ application to monitor these statistics on Jenkin’s master and
  slave nodes.
 
 Package: jenkins-memory-monitor-doc
@@ -34,9 +34,9 @@ Depends: ${maven:DocDepends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Recommends: ${maven:DocOptionalDepends}
 Suggests: jenkins-memory-monitor
 Description: Documentation for jenkins-memory-monitor.
- This library provide native integration for monitoring memory and
- swap usage from with Java code. It is used by the Jenkins CI
- application to monitor these statistics on jenkins master and
+ This library provides native integration for monitoring memory and
+ swap usage from within Java code. It is used by the Jenkins CI
+ application to monitor these statistics on Jenkin’s master and
  slave nodes.
  .
  This package provides the API documentation for jenkins-memory-monitor.
-- 
1.7.9.1
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