[Pkg-javascript-devel] Bug#739418: [libjs-jquery-history] "into URL hash" in extended description

Filipus Klutiero chealer at gmail.com
Tue Feb 18 13:16:52 UTC 2014


Package: libjs-jquery-history
Version: 9-1
Severity: minor

The extended description ends with:

> You can store the application state into URL hash and restore the state from it. 

The noun phrase "URL hash" is missing a determiner. I suggest:

> You can store the application state into a URL hash and restore the state from it.

However, it is best to avoid addressing the reader ("your", "you") in descriptions.

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Filipus Klutiero
http://www.philippecloutier.com



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