[Pkg-nagios-changes] [pkg-nagios] r2036 - nagvis/trunk/debian

[Alexander Reichle-Schmehl]

Author: tolimar
Date: 2012-06-01 16:52:34 +0000 (Fri, 01 Jun 2012)
New Revision: 2036

Modified:
   nagvis/trunk/debian/changelog
   nagvis/trunk/debian/control
   nagvis/trunk/debian/nagvis.templates
Log:
Improve package description and debconf templates with the help of Bubulle
and -l10n-english



Modified: nagvis/trunk/debian/changelog
===================================================================
--- nagvis/trunk/debian/changelog	2012-05-23 10:31:56 UTC (rev 2035)
+++ nagvis/trunk/debian/changelog	2012-06-01 16:52:34 UTC (rev 2036)
@@ -1,6 +1,8 @@
 nagvis (1:1.6.4.dfsg.1-3) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
 
   * NOT RELEASED YET
+  * Add patch from Christian Perrier and his gang to improve package
+    description and templates (first step of closing #674859)
 
  -- Alexander Reichle-Schmehl <tolimar at debian.org>  Wed, 23 May 2012 12:31:33 +0200
 

Modified: nagvis/trunk/debian/control
===================================================================
--- nagvis/trunk/debian/control	2012-05-23 10:31:56 UTC (rev 2035)
+++ nagvis/trunk/debian/control	2012-06-01 16:52:34 UTC (rev 2036)
@@ -13,36 +13,29 @@
 Architecture: all
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, php5-common (>= 5.3.0), libapache2-mod-php5, php5-gd, ucf, graphviz, php5-sqlite, php-net-socket, php-gettext, check-mk-livestatus
 Suggests: nagvis-demos
-Description: Visualization addon for Nagios or Icinga
- NagVis can be used to visualize Nagios or Icinga Data, e.g. to display IT
- processes like  a mail system or a network infrastructure.
+Description: visualization addon for Nagios or Icinga
+ NagVis can be used to visualize Nagios or Icinga data, for instance
+ to display network traffic or IT services such as email.
  .
- Key features are:
- .
-  * Display of single Hosts or Services
-  * Display the state of a Host dependent on the state of its services
-    ("recognize services")
-  * Visualization of Host- or Servicegroups with one icon
-  * Define Sub-Map icons wich represent a complete NagVis Map of
-    Hosts/Services/Groups in one icon (drill down)
-  * Visualization of complete IT Processes using self drawn graphics
+ Its key features are:
+  * Display of single hosts or services;
+  * Representation of a host dependent on the state of its services;
+  * Visualization of complete host- or servicegroups with one icon;
+  * Organization of hosts/services/groups into Sub-Map icons;
+  * Graphical representation of complete IT systems.
 
 Package: nagvis-demos
 Architecture: all
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, nagvis (= ${source:Version})
-Description: Demo Mapgs for NagVis
- NagVis can be used to visualize Nagios or Icinga Data, e.g. to display IT
- processes like  a mail system or a network infrastructure.
+Description: visualization addon for Nagios or Icinga - demo maps
+ NagVis can be used to visualize Nagios or Icinga data, for instance
+ to display network traffic or IT services such as email.
  .
- Key features are:
+ Its key features are:
+  * Display of single hosts or services;
+  * Representation of a host dependent on the state of its services;
+  * Visualization of complete host- or servicegroups with one icon;
+  * Organization of hosts/services/groups into Sub-Map icons;
+  * Graphical representation of complete IT systems.
  .
-  * Display of single Hosts or Services
-  * Display the state of a Host dependent on the state of its services
-    ("recognize services")
-  * Visualization of Host- or Servicegroups with one icon
-  * Define Sub-Map icons wich represent a complete NagVis Map of
-    Hosts/Services/Groups in one icon (drill down)
-  * Visualization of complete IT Processes using self drawn graphics
-  .
-  This package contains some demonstration maps.
-
+ This package provides some demonstration maps.

Modified: nagvis/trunk/debian/nagvis.templates
===================================================================
--- nagvis/trunk/debian/nagvis.templates	2012-05-23 10:31:56 UTC (rev 2035)
+++ nagvis/trunk/debian/nagvis.templates	2012-06-01 16:52:34 UTC (rev 2036)
@@ -1,3 +1,12 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-english at lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: nagvis/monitoring_system
 Type: select
 Default: icinga
@@ -2,9 +11,8 @@
 Choices: icinga, nagios, other
-_Description: For which monitoring suite should NagVis be configured?
- This NagVis package supports the monitoring suites Icinga as well as
- well as Nagios using the check-mk-live broker backend.  please choose the,
- respective entry.  
+_Description: Monitoring suite used with NagVis:
+ The NagVis package supports Icinga as well as
+ Nagios, using the check-mk-live broker backend.
  .
  If you would like to use NagVis with a different backend or a different
- monitoring suite, please choose "other".  You'll have to configure it
+ monitoring suite, please choose "other". You'll have to configure it
  manually.
@@ -14,9 +22,9 @@
 Template: nagvis/delete_on_purge
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Should the user created NagVis data be removed?
- During usage NagVis creates some file in /var/cache/nagvis and and
- /etc/nagvis (e.g. background images and map files), including a small
- database for authentification.  If you don't need any of these files,
+_Description: Delete NagVis data when purging the package?
+ NagVis creates files in /var/cache/nagvis and
+ /etc/nagvis (for instance background images and map files), including a small
+ database for authentification. If you don't need any of these files,
  they can be removed now, or you may want to keep them and clean up by hand
  later.