[Pkg-openldap-devel] Request for English debconf template review

[MJ Ray]

Justin B Rye <jbr at edlug.org.uk> wrote: [...]
> I don't see any typos or serious stuff like that.

Me neither.

>    During the upgrade, one or more slurpd "replica" options were found
>    in the slapd configuration file. Beginning with OpenLDAP 2.4, slurpd
>    is obsolete, so the replicas will need to be migrated to using
>    syncrepl instead.

I suggest avoiding the "Beginning with ..." construct and writing
"slurpd became obsolete in OpenLDAP 2.4" instead because I think it's
clearer and more direct.

But both versions posted so far are pretty good.

Hope that helps,
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