[Pkg-privacy-commits] [flashproxy] 47/65: update descriptions to be more useful to new users

[Ximin Luo]

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infinity0 pushed a commit to branch _volatile-rc
in repository flashproxy.

commit 769dc4bf47976c278579802fa973777491f148e0
Author: Ximin Luo <infinity0 at pwned.gg>
Date:   Sun Aug 3 22:03:05 2014 +0100

    update descriptions to be more useful to new users
---
 debian/control | 59 +++++++++++++++++++++++++---------------------------------
 1 file changed, 25 insertions(+), 34 deletions(-)

diff --git a/debian/control b/debian/control
index db00c6d..f1e3a3a 100644
--- a/debian/control
+++ b/debian/control
@@ -24,45 +24,40 @@ Package: flashproxy-common
 Architecture: all
 Section: python
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ${python:Depends}
-Description: Pluggable transport for ephemeral IP addresses - common library
+Description: Pluggable transport to circumvent IP address blocking - common library
  Flashproxy is a tool to circumvent censorship by setting up many, generally
  ephemeral, browser-based proxies, with the goal of outpacing a censor's
- ability to enumerate and block their IP addresses. Censored clients may then
- connect to a Tor relay via these proxies, rather than directly, by using a
- hard-to-block low-bandwidth registration system called the facilitator.
+ ability to enumerate and block the IP addresses of those proxies. Censored
+ clients can then connect to a Tor relay via these proxies, by using a
+ hard-to-block, low-bandwidth registration system called the facilitator.
  .
- It is compliant with the Tor pluggable transports specification.
- .
- This package contains a common Python library used by other components.
+ This package contains the common Python library used by other components.
 
 Package: flashproxy-client
 Architecture: all
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ${python:Depends}, flashproxy-common (= ${binary:Version})
-Description: Pluggable transport for ephemeral IP addresses - client transport plugin
+Description: Pluggable transport to circumvent IP address blocking - client transport plugin
  Flashproxy is a tool to circumvent censorship by setting up many, generally
  ephemeral, browser-based proxies, with the goal of outpacing a censor's
- ability to enumerate and block their IP addresses. Censored clients may then
- connect to a Tor relay via these proxies, rather than directly, by using a
- hard-to-block low-bandwidth registration system called the facilitator.
- .
- It is compliant with the Tor pluggable transports specification.
+ ability to enumerate and block the IP addresses of those proxies. Censored
+ clients can then connect to a Tor relay via these proxies, by using a
+ hard-to-block, low-bandwidth registration system called the facilitator.
  .
- This package contains the client transport plugin that allows censored Tor
- users to bypass censorship.
+ This package contains the client transport plugin that enables censored Tor
+ users to circumvent censorship. It is compliant with the Tor pluggable
+ transports specification.
 
 Package: flashproxy-facilitator
 Architecture: all
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ${python:Depends}, flashproxy-common (= ${binary:Version}), openssl, adduser
 Recommends: httpd-cgi | apache2
 Suggests: flashproxy-proxy
-Description: Pluggable transport for ephemeral IP addresses - facilitator
+Description: Pluggable transport to circumvent IP address blocking - facilitator
  Flashproxy is a tool to circumvent censorship by setting up many, generally
  ephemeral, browser-based proxies, with the goal of outpacing a censor's
- ability to enumerate and block their IP addresses. Censored clients may then
- connect to a Tor relay via these proxies, rather than directly, by using a
- hard-to-block low-bandwidth registration system called the facilitator.
- .
- It is compliant with the Tor pluggable transports specification.
+ ability to enumerate and block the IP addresses of those proxies. Censored
+ clients can then connect to a Tor relay via these proxies, by using a
+ hard-to-block, low-bandwidth registration system called the facilitator.
  .
  This package contains the facilitator that accepts registrations (requests
  for service) from clients, and serves them with a browser proxy that provides
@@ -75,14 +70,12 @@ Architecture: all
 Section: web
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}
 Recommends: httpd | apache2
-Description: Pluggable transport for ephemeral IP addresses - browser proxy
+Description: Pluggable transport to circumvent IP address blocking - browser proxy
  Flashproxy is a tool to circumvent censorship by setting up many, generally
  ephemeral, browser-based proxies, with the goal of outpacing a censor's
- ability to enumerate and block their IP addresses. Censored clients may then
- connect to a Tor relay via these proxies, rather than directly, by using a
- hard-to-block low-bandwidth registration system called the facilitator.
- .
- It is compliant with the Tor pluggable transports specification.
+ ability to enumerate and block the IP addresses of those proxies. Censored
+ clients can then connect to a Tor relay via these proxies, by using a
+ hard-to-block, low-bandwidth registration system called the facilitator.
  .
  This package contains the browser proxy to be served from a web server.
  Visitors to this website can then act as ephemeral proxies for censored users.
@@ -93,18 +86,16 @@ Package: node-flashproxy
 Architecture: all
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, flashproxy-proxy (= ${binary:Version}),
  nodejs, node-optimist, node-xmlhttprequest, node-ws
-Description: Pluggable transport for ephemeral IP addresses - nodejs proxy
+Description: Pluggable transport to circumvent IP address blocking - nodejs proxy
  Flashproxy is a tool to circumvent censorship by setting up many, generally
  ephemeral, browser-based proxies, with the goal of outpacing a censor's
- ability to enumerate and block their IP addresses. Censored clients may then
- connect to a Tor relay via these proxies, rather than directly, by using a
- hard-to-block low-bandwidth registration system called the facilitator.
- .
- It is compliant with the Tor pluggable transports specification.
+ ability to enumerate and block the IP addresses of those proxies. Censored
+ clients can then connect to a Tor relay via these proxies, by using a
+ hard-to-block, low-bandwidth registration system called the facilitator.
  .
  This package contains a nodejs-based proxy to be run as a local service. It
  is for people that constantly want to act as proxies for censored users.
  Due to the design of the system, it more useful when installed on a machine
- that continually switches location, such as a laptop.
+ that continually changes IP address, such as a laptop.
  .
  Most end-users do not need to install this package.

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