[Pkg-systemd-maintainers] Bug#739814: [systemd-ui] "on other init script" in extended description

Filipus Klutiero chealer at gmail.com
Sat Feb 22 17:40:38 GMT 2014


Package: systemd-ui
Version: 3-1
Severity: minor

The extended description contains:
> It also provides process supervision using cgroups and the ability to not only depend on other init script being started, but also availability of a given mount point or D-Bus service.

The noun phrase "other init script" is missing a determiner (the zero article could be used if "script" was plural). "another init script" might be intended.

By the way, the rest of the sentence has the same problem ("but also availability of a given mount point or D-Bus service").

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