Bug#300704: siproxd: Minor comments on package description

[Helge Kreutzmann]

Package: siproxd
Version: 0.57.snap040720-2
Severity: minor
Tags: patch

I have the following corrections/improvements:

-Siproxd is a proxy/masquerading daemon for the SIP protocol.
+Siproxd is a proxy/masquerading daemon for SIP (Session Initiation Protocol),
+which is used in IP telephony.

Rationale: SIP needs to be expanded on first occurance. Further the
"P" of SIP is already "protocoll", hence you do not need to double it
afterwards. And finally, it should be mentioned that "SIP" is for IP
telephony, so the casual reader can evaluate if she might need it.

-to make SIP connections possible via an masquerading firewall
+to make SIP connections possible via a masquerading firewall

No vowel, hence "a"

And finally you should standarize on a certain style with all package
maintainers using SIP. On
http://packages.debian.org/testing/net/siproxd

SIP is always captialized, except on 

linphone
    A sip phone



-- System Information
Debian Release: 3.0
Architecture: i386
Kernel: Linux pleione 2.4.26-grsec #1 Tue Aug 10 15:42:40 CEST 2004 i686
Locale: LANG=en_US, LC_CTYPE=en_US