[Pkg-xen-devel] Release notes addition for Xen support in Debian

[Thomas Goirand]

On 12/29/2010 07:40 PM, Justin B Rye wrote:
> Martin Zobel-Helas wrote:
>> Thomas, if you don't mind, i still would like to tweak the text a bit.
> 
> Most of your changes look to me like definite improvements, except:
> 
>>> This does not happen under GRUB 2 in Squeeze.  Instead, the non-Xen
>>> kernel will boot by default. 
>>
>> This behavior changed with GRUB 2 in Squeeze and the non-Xen kernel will
>> boot per default.
> 
> An improvement, but the "and" is a bit weak - maybe...
> 
>   This behavior has changed with GRUB 2 in Squeeze: the non-Xen kernel
>   will boot by default.
> 
> [...] 
>>> Also, upgrading from the Lenny version of Xen does not automatically install
>>> the current 4.0 version. 
>>
>> When upgrading from Lenny version 4.0 of the Xen package will not
>> install automatically. 
> 
> No, this needs clearer punctuation ("Lenny version 4.0"?),
> preferably without the dangling modifier (version 4.0 of Xen isn't
> "upgrading").  If you don't like my original version, how about:
> 
>   Upgrades from Lenny will not automatically install Xen version 4.0.

Thanks. Indeed, there was some possible confusion. Patched accordingly.

Please find the new patch attached to this email.

Thomas Goirand (zigo)
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