[Python-modules-commits] r13799 - in packages/okasha/trunk/debian (copyright)

[aelmahmoudy-guest at users.alioth.debian.org]

    Date: Tuesday, July 6, 2010 @ 02:46:22
  Author: aelmahmoudy-guest
Revision: 13799

* Grammatically correct disclaimer
* Fix spelling mistakes in WPL english translation

Modified:
  packages/okasha/trunk/debian/copyright

Modified: packages/okasha/trunk/debian/copyright
===================================================================
--- packages/okasha/trunk/debian/copyright	2010-07-05 19:42:15 UTC (rev 13798)
+++ packages/okasha/trunk/debian/copyright	2010-07-06 02:46:22 UTC (rev 13799)
@@ -2,10 +2,12 @@
 Maintainer: Muayyad Saleh Alsadi <alsadi at ojuba.org>
 Source: http://okasha.ojuba.org
 Name: Okasha
-Disclaimer: This package is formally not part of the Debian GNU/Linux
-            distribution, because of the Usage term in Waqf Public License only
-            allows usage  for any good purpose and he may not use it to harm
-            others or violate the permissive principles of Islam.
+Disclaimer: This package is not part of the Debian GNU/Linux distribution. It
+            is provided in the non-free archive area as a convenience to Debian
+            users. The Waqf Public licence Usage clause contains the following
+            restrictions on field of endeavor: "The user may use the work for
+            any good purpose and he may not use it to harm others or violate
+            the permissive principles of Islam"
 
 Files: *
 Copyright: 2009-2010, Muayyad Alsadi <alsadi at ojuba.org>
@@ -225,14 +227,14 @@
    * the so call “Intellectual Proprietary” is all about giving owners the
      right to forbid what Allah had made lawful to gain money, not by
      providing service nor goods.
-   *Â The uncertainty and untangable nature of the claimed owned product is
+   *Â The uncertainty and intangible nature of the claimed owned product is
      the source of “protection money collecting” where some company
      threaten some smaller company by copyright infringement lawsuit on
      some purposely ambiguous product which the later can't afford so they
      go safe and pay.
  .
  If the good intentions made excuses to introduce “intellectual
- proprietary” by the Machiavellists who wrote the American constitution
+ proprietary” by the Machiavellians who wrote the American constitution
  as an acquired right (at least they admit it's not a natural right), they
  serve their own way of life which is not international. We don't take
  that. We have our own high moral standards. We introduce Waqf General
@@ -268,7 +270,7 @@
  .
    *Â The intellectual work (or The work for short): is any useful
      intangible intellectual product that can be passed on to others or
-     replicated withno cost imposed on the original author or the one who
+     replicated with no cost imposed on the original author or the one who
      pass it on before.
    *Â The holder: is the creative author or the party which carried the
      process of developing the work and make it available (and the one who