d-d-a draft, please review

[Ximin Luo]

Mattia Rizzolo:
> I gently remind you of this; I plan to send it out in 2 days.
> 
> On Thu, 13 Jul 2017, 9:25 p.m. Mattia Rizzolo, <mattia at debian.org> wrote:
> 
>> On Thu, Jul 13, 2017 at 11:43:04AM -0700, Vagrant Cascadian wrote:
>>> Happy to review, just let me know where the text is to review! :)
>>
>>
>> Right, I clearly sent the wrong URL in my previous email!
>> The right one:
>>
>> https://pad.riseup.net/p/ZqHmLV7iEP3L
>>
>>

Looks good! I made a few further minor wording tweaks.

X

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