[Tux4kids-commits] r1085 - tux4kids-web/htdocs/newsitetest/tux4kids

[Tim Holy]

Author: tholy-guest
Date: 2009-06-24 02:16:53 +0000 (Wed, 24 Jun 2009)
New Revision: 1085

Modified:
   tux4kids-web/htdocs/newsitetest/tux4kids/projects.php
Log:
More playful projects description.


Modified: tux4kids-web/htdocs/newsitetest/tux4kids/projects.php
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--- tux4kids-web/htdocs/newsitetest/tux4kids/projects.php	2009-06-24 01:59:04 UTC (rev 1084)
+++ tux4kids-web/htdocs/newsitetest/tux4kids/projects.php	2009-06-24 02:16:53 UTC (rev 1085)
@@ -23,8 +23,7 @@
 							<a href="http://tux4kids.alioth.debian.org/newsitetest/tuxmath/index.php"><img src="images/tm_title.png" /></a>
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-							<a href="http://tux4kids.alioth.debian.org/newsitetest/tuxmath/index.php">Tux, of Math Command</a>, AKA TuxMath, is 
-							a great program that uses several different playing styles on two different games to help teach kids math skills in a fun way.
+							<a href="http://tux4kids.alioth.debian.org/newsitetest/tuxmath/index.php">Tux, of Math Command</a>, AKA TuxMath, lets kids hone their arithmetic skills while they defend penguins from incoming comets, or offers them a chance to explore the asteroid belt with only their factoring abilities to bring them through safely!
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@@ -32,8 +31,8 @@
 							<a href="http://www.tuxpaint.org/"><img src="images/tp_title.png" /></a>
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-							Partnering with New Breed Software, Tux4Kids helps bring you <a href="http://www.tuxpaint.org/">Tux Paint</a>. This fun drawing game 
-							encourages kids to be creative and creates a fun environment complete with sound effects. 							
+							Partnering with New Breed Software, Tux4Kids helps bring you <a href="http://www.tuxpaint.org/">Tux Paint</a>. This remarkable drawing program
+							empowers kids to be creative in an environment complete with magic tools and sound effects. 							
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@@ -41,8 +40,7 @@
 							<a href="http://tux4kids.alioth.debian.org/newsitetest/tuxtype/index.php"><img src="images/tt_title.png" /></a>
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-							Tux4Kids also works on a typing game called <a href="http://tux4kids.alioth.debian.org/newsitetest/tuxtype/index.php">TuxTyping</a>.
-							This educational game comes with two different games for practicing your typing, and having a great time doing it. 
+							<a href="http://tux4kids.alioth.debian.org/newsitetest/tuxtype/index.php">TuxTyping</a> Tux the penguin is hungry, and loves to eat fish. But Tux can only catch the fish if you type the right letters in time! Can you help Tux?
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