[Debian-med-packaging] Bug#678257: Typos in package description, rewording proposal

[Martin Eberhard Schauer]

Package: freediams
Version: 0.7.4-2
Severity: wishlist
X-Debbugs-CC: debian-l10n-english at lists.debian.org

Dear Debian Med Packagers,

I think that I found some typos in the package description. Also
I would like to suggest some minor wording changes.

The status quo (1)

    Description: Pharmaceutical drugs prescriptor and interactions checker
     The FreeMedForms project is a set of free and open source
     medical application used to help health professionals
     in their current practice.
     It is developed by a international community of medical
     doctors and computer workers.
     .
     FreeDiams is a pharmaceutical drug prescriptor assistant.
     It can be used to creation complex prescription and to manage
     drugs interactions.

For me a project is a group of persons working on a task. So it can't be
a collection of applications. Debian is free - so free and open source
are redundant.

My proposal:

    Description: Pharmaceutical drugs prescriptor and interactions checker
     The FreeMedForms project maintains a set of medical applications
     used to help health professionals in their current practice.
     It is developed by an international community of medical doctors
     and computer specialists.
     .
     FreeDiams is a pharmaceutical drug prescriptor assistant.
     It can be used to create complex prescriptions and to handle
     drugs interactions.

Kind regards,
    Martin

P.S.: Greetings from "South Lower Saxony" to the Harz.

1:http://ddtp.debian.net/ddt.cgi?desc_id=129993