[Freedombox-discuss] Grant Proposal Feedback Requested
nick.m.daly at gmail.com
Fri Sep 16 16:32:00 UTC 2011
On Sep 16, 2011, at 5:54 PM, Stefano wrote:
> On Fri, 2011-09-16 at 00:16 -0500, Nick Daly wrote:
>> What I need from you guys is to review my grant presentation before I
>> present it at September 18th, 6 PM (EST).
> I'd be glad to help you but I have only a few spare minutes in my
> life. Can you make the presentation available in a more convenient
> format? Anything that can be managed directly by the browser would
> be good.
I suspect you folks had password problems, my mistake for making this
more complicated than it needed to be. These are exactly the types of
issues I need feedback on! :)
Now, it's just a good old zip file:
The zip file contains:
The grant proposal presentation I'll be presenting on Sunday.
The grant submission that got approved.
The RST files are the source files I used to create the
presentation and PDF.
Again, I'm looking for feedback on:
- Is the message useful and encouraging? How could it be improved?
- Is it accessible to non-Linux gurus? Where is the technobabble?
- Is it technically correct? Why or why not?
- Is what I plan to do with the grant money obvious?
Thanks so much for your help!
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