[Pkg-citadel-devel] Bug#475420: webcit: Fixes and improvement suggestions for your Debconf template

[Helge Kreutzmann]

Package: webcit
Version: 7.34-dfsg-1
Severity: normal
Tags: patch
X-Debbugs-CC: Christian Perrier <bubulle at debian.org>

While translating your Debconf template to German, I found several
(minor) errrors and possibilities for improvement, see the following
pseudo patch. Also I found your numerous uses of hard line breaks
("\n") stumbling, you might review your practice there as well. I
CC'ed Christian Perrier who is very versed in Debconf best practices
and who probably can give you better insight in this issues than I
can.

Without ado, here are my fixes/suggestions:
-msgid "Should Webcit be integrated in your Apache?"
+msgid "Should Webcit be integrated in your Apache webserver?"

-" Select the Port, which the plain HTTP webcit server should listen on.\n"
+" Select the port, which the plain HTTP Webcit server should listen on.\n"

-" Select Port 80 if you don't have another webserver running.-1 to disable."
+" Select Port 80 if you don't have another webserver running or -1 to disable."

-msgid "WebCit HTTPS port:"
+msgid "Webcit HTTPS port:"

-" Select the Port, which the SSL HTTP webcit server should listen on. -1 to "
+" Select the port, which the SSL HTTP Webcit server should listen on or  -1 to
"

-" Administrator user, and do the fine setup. Log in as the user you\n"
+" administrator user, and do the fine setup. Log in as the user you\n"

-" specified as the Administrator, and\n"
+" specified as the administrator, and\n"

-" review the Points under the Administration menu. If you have further\n"
+" review the points under the Administration menu. If you have further\n"
(here you should check the captialization of "Administration menu" as well)

-" questions review www.citadel.org, specialy the FAQ and Documentation\n"
+" questions review www.citadel.org, especially the FAQ and Documentation\n"


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