Bug#441419: "originaly" in extended description
Filipus Klutiero
chealer at gmail.com
Mon Sep 10 16:02:33 UTC 2007
Le lundi 10 septembre 2007 07:55, Gonéri Le Bouder a écrit :
> tag 441419 pending
> thanks
>
> On Sun, Sep 09, 2007 at 12:26:12PM -0400, Philippe Cloutier wrote:
> > Package: supertuxkart
> > Version: 0.3-1
> > Severity: minor
> >
> > The extended description starts with "SuperTuxKart is an enhanced
> > version of TuxKart. The kart racing game, originaly
> > done by Steve Baker, featuring Tux and a bunch of his friends."
> > "originaly" should read "originally". Also, the syntax is incorrect. In
> > an apposition, a comma should be used after TuxKart rather than a period.
> Hello,
>
> Thank you fro your report. I applied to changes. This is te new description that
> I commited on Debian Games svn.
>
> Description: kart racing game
> SuperTuxKart is an enhanced version of TuxKart, the kart racing game originally
> done by Steve Baker, featuring Tux and a bunch of his friends. SuperTuxKart
> is the work of the GotM run for TuxKart at happypenguin.org. Due to some
> disagreements that happened in that time this fork of TuxKart was done.
> SuperTuxKart features include:
> -new characters
> -new tracks
> -a completly new userinterface
> - some smaller graphical improvemnts (skidmarks, smoke, animated wheels, etc.)
> .
> Homepage: http://supertuxkart.berlios.de/
>
There are still some problems in the new description:
"completly" instead of "completely"
"userinterface" instead of "user interface"
"improvemnts" instead of "improvements"
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