Bug#441419: "originaly" in extended description

Gonéri Le Bouder goneri at rulezlan.org
Mon Sep 10 20:56:24 UTC 2007


On Mon, Sep 10, 2007 at 12:02:33PM -0400, Filipus Klutiero wrote:
> Le lundi 10 septembre 2007 07:55, Gonéri Le Bouder a écrit :
> > tag 441419 pending
> > thanks
> > 
> > On Sun, Sep 09, 2007 at 12:26:12PM -0400, Philippe Cloutier wrote:
> > > Package: supertuxkart
> > > Version: 0.3-1
> > > Severity: minor
> > > 
> > > The extended description starts with "SuperTuxKart is an enhanced 
> > > version of TuxKart. The kart racing game, originaly
> > > done by Steve Baker, featuring Tux and a bunch of his friends."
> > > "originaly" should read "originally". Also, the syntax is incorrect. In 
> > > an apposition, a comma should be used after TuxKart rather than a period.
> > Hello,
> > 
> > Thank you fro your report. I applied to changes. This is te new description that
> > I commited on Debian Games svn.
> > 
> > Description: kart racing game
> >  SuperTuxKart is an enhanced version of TuxKart, the kart racing game originally
> >  done by Steve Baker, featuring Tux and a bunch of his friends. SuperTuxKart
> >  is the work of the GotM run for TuxKart at  happypenguin.org. Due to some
> >  disagreements that happened in that time this fork of TuxKart was done.
> >   SuperTuxKart features include:
> >    -new characters
> >    -new tracks
> >    -a completly new userinterface
> >   - some smaller graphical improvemnts (skidmarks, smoke, animated wheels, etc.)
> >  .
> >   Homepage: http://supertuxkart.berlios.de/
> > 
> There are still some problems in the new description:
> "completly" instead of "completely"
> "userinterface" instead of "user interface"
> "improvemnts" instead of "improvements"
thanks,


                      Gonéri
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