[Pkg-mozext-maintainers] Bug#719544: [xul-ext-firetray] "allowing [...] other features" in extended description

Filipus Klutiero chealer at gmail.com
Mon Aug 12 22:00:25 UTC 2013


Package: xul-ext-firetray
Version: 0.4.6-1
Severity: minor
X-Debbugs-Cc: 637830 at bugs.debian.org

As reported in #637830, the end of firetray's description ("and other features") is broken:
> FireTray is a system tray extension for Icedove, Iceweasel, and alike,
> allowing to set up a custom icon, hiding to tray instead of closing, display
> the number of unread messages in mailing applications, and other features.

In fact, "and other features" must not be stray, but rather an incorrect phrasing. Having "more" there instead of "other features" would work.

By the way, "alike" and "similar" cannot always be used interchangeably. Oh, and there's a small mismatch (verb tenses). I suggest:
> FireTray is a system tray extension for Icedove, Iceweasel and similar applications,
> allowing to set up a custom icon, hide to tray instead of closing, display
> the number of unread messages in mailing applications and more.

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