[Python-apps-team] Bug#528202: Bug#528202: babiloo: long description no sentence

[Marco Rodrigues]

Gerfried Fuchs wrote:
> Package: babiloo
> Version: 2.0.7-1
> Severity: minor
> 
>         Hi!
> 
>  It would be nice if the long description of your package could consist
> of full sentences[1], the last blurb in the first paragraph isn't really
> one.
> 
>  So long, and thanks for your great work nevertheless!
> Rhonda
> [1] <http://www.us.debian.org/doc/developers-reference/best-pkging-practices#bpp-pkg-desc>

Hi Rhonda!

I tried to improve it a bit, I hope you like it...

---
Description: dictionary viewer with multi-languages support
 Babiloo is a dictionary viewer that supports various formats
 and HTML displaying for the supported dictionaries.
 Able to download more dictionaries within the application.
 .
 Features:
   * Support for many languages / fonts rendering.
   * Don't convert dictionaries, use originals.
   * Phonetic sounds.
   * Advanced search.
   * Collaborative dictionaries.
 .
 This package contains the GUI frontend and common files.
---

It's good enough ? or you've some better ideas ?

Thanks

-- 
Marco Rodrigues

http://Marco.Tondela.org