[Python-apps-team] Bug#528202: Bug#528202: babiloo: long description no sentence

[Gerfried Fuchs]

	Hi!

* Marco Rodrigues <gothicx at sapo.pt> [2009-05-11 21:32:04 CEST]:
> Gerfried Fuchs wrote:
> >  It would be nice if the long description of your package could consist
> > of full sentences[1], the last blurb in the first paragraph isn't really
> > one.
> 
> Hi Rhonda!
> 
> I tried to improve it a bit, I hope you like it...
> 
> ---
> Description: dictionary viewer with multi-languages support
>  Babiloo is a dictionary viewer that supports various formats
>  and HTML displaying for the supported dictionaries.
>  Able to download more dictionaries within the application.
   ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

 This part is still the same, and it's not a sentence. That was what I
was refering to. This sentence is missing its subject, what is able to
download more dictionaries?

>  Features:
>    * Support for many languages / fonts rendering.
>    * Don't convert dictionaries, use originals.
>    * Phonetic sounds.
>    * Advanced search.
>    * Collaborative dictionaries.

 ... furthermore, I now notice you indent the list even with three
spaces instead of only two - is there any special reason to do so?

 Thanks. :)
Rhonda