Bug#270323: bonobo-activation-server.1.gz: grammar

Dan Jacobson Dan Jacobson <jidanni@jidanni.org>, 270323@bugs.debian.org
Tue, 07 Sep 2004 02:52:56 +0800

Package: libbonobo2-common
Version: 2.6.2-4
Severity: minor
File: /usr/share/man/man1/bonobo-activation-server.1.gz

       bonobo-activation-server  -  The bonobo activation server, for tracking

Don't repeat! Say e.g.,

       bonobo-activation-server  -  Gnome component tracker

-- -- --

       This application tracks information about installed components and bro-
       kers  components,  in  conjunction with it's client library; libbonobo-

its, not it's

       It     reads     the     component     descriptions     from     ${pre-
       fix}/lib/bonobo/servers/*.server,  these  files provide an XML descrip-

new sentence, not comma

       Bonobo-activation-server, also ensures that the minimum neccessary num-

no comma

       using your prefix,  it  will  examine  the  BONOBO_ACTIVATION_PATH  and
       GNOME2_PATH environment variables find .server files.

missing word near variables